I really like the melody. The mixing is on point. It's structured well. I can't find anything wrong with it. Good work!
I really like the melody. The mixing is on point. It's structured well. I can't find anything wrong with it. Good work!
Thanks man I appreciate it!
The first synth has some annoying really high pitches in it. Halfway through and still no lead synth, it comes in 1:33, but I would say that's too late if it's only two minutes long. It's a nice song, even though it has a kind of muddy low end. The last noise is really obnoxious. Those were just the bad parts, I liked the rest of it.
Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, the song started out with the intention of having no lead synth, but after I made it, I decided to leave it in. EQing is still something I really need to get a hang of, but I'm enjoying the baby steps I'm taking. Thanks again for the input :D
Nice work! It really sounds like a orchestra is actually playing it. I could see it in a game, but I feel like they would ruin it by looping the first 16 or 38 seconds. I feel like it could have used some more extreme gestures, if that makes sense.
Thanks for the feedback! :)
Good song, but it's a bit repetitive.
Thank You!!!
It's a nice song, if a little obnoxious. Sorry about that 2 star rating, they were probably quick to hit the button. I'm going to rate it 5 stars to bring the ratio up to what I think it should be. Shhhhh it's a nice trick to know. I heard that you were looking for notifications. Here you go! 1:29 was my favorite part. Oh wait, the riser starts around 1:06... interesting. That's a long riser!
Thanks for your care XD
do you have an idea how can i advertise myself so more people starts to listen my music?
I was looking for some ways, but i needed credit car (which i don't have because i'm a godamn 14-year old boy XD), i opened like 10 accounts on diffrent webpages and fill ed them with posts, and nothing...
Send me a PM if you know.
I don't know man. It kind of sounds like it should be peaceful, but the synths are all punchy and... angry. 1:29 is really awkward. Keep trying, I'd be happy to check out your next track if you message me about it. Sorry if I'm being critical, I just had a streak of finding really awesome music, and it's just... contrast.
thats ok, thx for the comment.
I agree with Lethalix, the drums are weird. I feel like the mixing is off, but it's pretty good work for GarageBand.
Thanks!
There are so many amazing musicians on Newgrounds. ;-;
The mix is off? I can't tell. I mean, how does one even compose something like this? I feel like orchestras should be playing this. And it should be heard by so many more people.
I like hearing things that people say they made with their friend. It makes me think of the way IslandJump1 and I collaborate, and then I imagine the same thing happening somewhere else in the world. It's really cool. Great song, by the way, I listened to it all the way through. I would say you are some of the best musicians on Newgrounds. The song is so unique and exciting.
Honestly I'm pretty lucky to have a friend that produces that grew up in the same town as I did. Working with another person on music is an all around enjoyable experience and usually results in some pretty interesting stuff. And thanks for the praise.
Hello everyone! I am TechnoLogical15, and I create electronic music. The program I used to make my music prior to Valiant Journey was Ignite. Now I use FL Studio 12. If you would like to contact me, please PM me. Feel free to check out my creations.
Joined on 1/20/15